8. Paper 2 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection.

Paper 2 first draft 


Paper 2 final draft

Reflection

In my first draft, I mainly focused on the idea that immigrants are not just takers, but I didn’t explain it very clearly. After reading the feedback, I realized that my argument needed to be stronger and more personal. In the final draft, I improved my thesis, added clearer examples, and even shared a real story about my friend. I also corrected some grammar and sentence structure problems. Through this writing process, I learned how to organize my ideas better and how to combine facts with personal experience. One important lesson I learned is that writing takes time, and I can always make it better by revising and listening to feedback.









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