7. Paper 1 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection.

 Paper 1 first draft:

 Paper 1 final draft:
    Reflection
When I wrote the first draft, I mainly shared my own story and general ideas about the American Dream. After reading the teacher’s feedback, I realized I needed to add more support from the readings. In the final draft, I added quotes from The Distance Between Us and A Brief History of Immigration in the United States, which made my writing stronger. I also worked on improving my organization and topic sentences. This writing process taught me that good writing needs revision and clear structure. I also learned that using both personal experience and class sources can make my ideas more powerful.








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